This looks a lot different from your normal works. I must say, I kinda like the slight change in your style in this. I think the big thing is that the detailing looks a little tighter. Just that one shift seems to have taken this piece a massive step forward. Good job! Even if you don't win (which I hope you do) you still have a victory in that. I also like how nicely you rounded out the line art. Keep up the good work!
I did work harder on it, especially since it's for a contest (I'm happy if I even win Runner up ;c; ). I'm glad you think it looks more detailed ~ And as for the lineart, I usually just draw up the lineart and then I draw up the clothing... for this drawing, I actually spent time at the end to fill in the lineart to make it look better. c: Thank you, Tuna-senpai!
The attention you showed to it really does show. Your gradually growing as an artist, more and more. But don't think that this means I'm noticing you! I may be watching you, but it's not because I notice you! I- I just felt an urge to press the watch button! That's all! B-Baka!